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제 목 What can governments do to encourage more people to vote in the election?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-04-08
작성글 A.) What can governments do to encourage more people to vote in the election? Please elaborate on your answer.

People will not go to vote when they have no interest in the election or no time due to work.
So following two could be considered to encourage people to vote in the election.
Advertising the election enough to attract their interest will be first
and ensuring that workers don't prevent going to vote will be second.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(04/05/22)

1. 신용장 사용에 따른 위험요소는 뭔가요?
What will be the risk of using the LC?

2. 신용 위장 및 위조를 조심하셔야 합니다.
You must be alert for disguised and counterfeited credit.

3. 개설 은행은 운송 중의 파손을 책임지지 않습니다.
The opening bank will not guarantee the damage in transit.
교정내용

A.) What can governments do to encourage more people to vote in the election? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

People will not go to vote when they have no interest in the election or no time due to work. 

So following two could be considered to encourage people to vote in the election.  

Advertising the election enough to attract their interest will be first 

and ensuring that workers don't prevent going to vote will be second.    

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/05/22)

 

1. 신용장 사용에 따른 위험요소는 뭔가요?

What will be the risk of using the LC?  

 

 

2. 신용 위장 및 위조를 조심하셔야 합니다.

You must be alert for disguised and counterfeited credit.  

 

 

  3. 개설 은행은 운송 중의 파손을 책임지지 않습니다.

The opening bank will not guarantee the damage in transit.   

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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