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제 목 What might explain the Moche culture’s downfall?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-04-17
작성글 A.) What might explain the Moche culture’s downfall? Please elaborate on your answer.

The Moche culture is said to have existed between 100 AD and 700 AD,
which would be very long before Maya or Inca.
It also preceded the Europeans' arrival.
So its demise would be ascribed to natural catastrophes such as earthquakes or droughts.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(04/12/22)

1. 명시된 수취인만 어음을 사용할 수 있습니다.
Only the stipulated recipient can use the banknote.

2. 구체적인 사항은 팩스로 보낼 수 있습니다.
Details could be transferred by fax.

3. 어음을 받으려면 두 개의 신분증이 필요합니다.
Two identifications will be required to take the banknote.
교정내용

A.) What might explain the Moche culture’s downfall? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The Moche culture is said to have existed between 100 AD and 700 AD, 

which would be very long before Maya or Inca.  

It also preceded the Europeans' arrival.

So its demise would be ascribed to natural catastrophes such as earthquakes or droughts.   

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/12/22)

 

1. 명시된 수취인만 어음을 사용할 수 있습니다.

Only the stipulated recipient can use the banknote.  

 

 2. 구체적인 사항은 팩스로 보낼 수 있습니다.

Details could be transferred by fax.   

 

 

3. 어음을 받으려면 두 개의 신분증이 필요합니다.

Two identifications will be required to take the banknote.  

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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