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제 목 How do traditional Ferris wheels and observation wheels, or rings, differ?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-04-23
작성글 A.) How do traditional Ferris wheels and observation wheels, or rings, differ? Please elaborate on your answer.

Traditional Ferries have a rim rotating with their cabins hung to it.
But in observation wheels, the cabins orbit on the rim.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(04/19/22)

1. 주문하고 싶습니다.
I would like to place an order.

2. 책 500 권을 주문하고 싶습니다.
I want to order 500 of books.

3. 처음 주문이 만족스럽다면 추가 주문을 할 예정입니다.
When the first order is satisfactory, I will place additional orders.

교정내용

A.) How do traditional Ferris wheels and observation wheels, or rings, differ? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Traditional Ferries have a rim rotating with their cabins hung to it.

But in observation wheels, the cabins orbit on the rim.   

 

 B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/19/22)

 

1. 주문하고 싶습니다.

I would like to place an order.  

 

2. 책 500 권을 주문하고 싶습니다.

I want to order 500 of books.

=>   We'd like to order 500 copies of the book.

 

3. 처음 주문이 만족스럽다면 추가 주문을 할 예정입니다.

When the first order is satisfactory, I will place additional orders.  

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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