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제 목 What can be done to help people without access to clean drinking water?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-04-23
작성글 A.) What can be done to help people without access to clean drinking water? Please elaborate on your answer.

Measures depend on situations which obstruct access to clean drinking water.
They could be ascribed to deficient rainfall or poor facilities.
The former case could be solved by helping to collect freshwater
while the latter case could be settled by building or improving facilities for water supply.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(04/21/22)

1. 견적에는 무엇이 포함되어 있나요?
What does the estimate include?

2. 제품번호를 말씀해 주시겠습니까?
Could you tell me the serial number?

3. 몇 개를 주문하고 싶으세요?
How many pieces will you order?
교정내용

A.) What can be done to help people without access to clean drinking water? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Measures depend on situations that obstruct access to clean drinking water. 

They could be ascribed to deficient rainfall or poor facilities.

The former case could be solved by helping collect fresh water while the latter 

while the latter case could be settled by building or improving facilities for water supply.   

         

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/21/22)

 

1. 견적에는 무엇이 포함되어 있나요?

What does the estimate include?  

 

2. 제품번호를 말씀해 주시겠습니까?

Could you tell me the serial number?  

 

 3. 몇 개를 주문하고 싶으세요?

How many pieces will you order?   

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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