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교정강사 Mariel(C)
등록일 2021-05-20
작성글 HOMEWORK:

A. What does “inner beauty” mean to you?
B. "Inner beauty" means the beauty of the mind.
I think the beauty of the mind is more important than the appearance.

-우리 그 얘기 그냥 그만할 수 없어?
Can't we just stop talking about it?

-제가 도와 드릴게요.
I can help you. or Let me help you.


NEXT LESSON: Core English-Intermediate 1 P. 51 (05/20/2021)
교정내용

What does “inner beauty” mean to you?

 "Inner beauty" means the beauty of the mind. 

I think the beauty of the mind is more important than the appearance. --> I think that mental beauty is more important than physical beauty. => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 

Can't we just stop talking about it? --> Can we just drop it?

I can help you. or Let me help you. --> Let me give you a hand. 

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

 

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