First,  wake up lately, and  i would like  to eat brunch  and  go out  working   my near place , earing my headphones  with music.. 

--> First, I would like to wake up late, eat brunch and go walking near my place while listening to music using headphones on my ears. 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

Second,  after  go back  home   l call   cacaotok my  friendand  sister. Cause  save the  money. 

--> Second, after I got back home. I will call my friend and sister using Cacaotalk to save money. 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.​

after, i lie couch sofa  watch the TV, and turn channels often chaning.  with a cup of coffee.

--> After that, I want to lie on the sofa while watching TV and turn channels with a cup of coffee. 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.​

Last,  l  should  go  massage  shop. Becase i want  be pretty, also  i  want  to  look  younger    than  i am.

I think, Iiusually  tried not to  do   what  i try weekend do   what  is the  ideal  weekend  for  me.

--> Last, I'd like to go to the spa because I want to look younger and prettier than I am. I think, the ideal weekend for me is when I don't do the things I usually do on weekdays. 

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

​제가해야할일에 최선을  다하겠읍니다,

I'll  do my best  what  i do. --> I'll do my best for what I have to do .

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

감기걸리지않도록조심해ㆍ

Watch   out  for  the   cold. --> Take care not to catch a cold.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.​

그는계단에서 굴러떨어져 의식을잃었다

He passed out  to fell down  the  stairs. --> He fell unconscious after falling down the stairs.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.​

GREAT JOB! :)​