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교정강사 Mariel(C)
등록일 2021-03-31
작성글 HOMEWORK:

A. What's the most encouraging book you've ever read?
B. When I took care of my kids, I sometimes had a lot of hard time.
Parenting books gave me help every time.


-유가가 바닥으로 떨어졌다.
The oil price was to be bottom.

-나에게 친절을 베풀다.
kind to me.

-나는 그녀의 눈길을 끌려고 애썼다.
I tried to get her.
교정내용

A. What's the most encouraging book you've ever read?

B. When I took care of my kids, I sometimes had a lot of hard time. 

Parenting books gave me help every time. -- Parenting books were helpful in those times. => Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

The oil price was to be bottom. -- > The oil price has hit bottom. 

 

kind to me. -- > Would you do me a favor? 

 

I tried to get her.  -- > I tried to catch her eye. 

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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