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| 제 목 |
Should many more platypuses be released in the park?  |
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
| 등록일 | 2023-06-20 |
| 작성글 |
A) Should many more platypuses be released in the park? Please elaborate on your answer. Artificial intervention in nature could break the ecological balance. Before releasing platypuses, other animals are said to be expelled because they are predators of platypuses. I fear that this means another loss of habitats. B) (06/16/22) 1. 오전 중 아무 때나 괜찮습니다. Anytime would be fine in the morning. 2. 언제든 괜찮습니다. Anytime will be ok. 3. 어디서 만날까요? Where will we meet? |
| 교정내용 |
A) Should many more platypuses be released in the park? Please elaborate on your answer.
Artificial intervention in nature could break the ecological balance. Before releasing platypuses, other animals are said to be expelled because they are predators of platypuses. I fear that this means another loss of habitats. ✔
B)
(06/16/22)
1. 오전 중 아무 때나 괜찮습니다. Anytime would be fine in the morning. ✔
2. 언제든 괜찮습니다. Anytime will be ok. ✔
3. 어디서 만날까요? Where will we meet? ✔ • Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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