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제 목 How will space exploration impact humanity?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-06-20
작성글 A

How will space exploration impact humanity? Please elaborate on your answer.

Space exploration would be a result of overcoming limits that could not have been expected before. So its success would lead people to hope for the future.

B

(05/08/22)

1. 어떠한 점에서 보낸 상품의 품질이 뒤떨어진다고 생각하시는지 설명해 주실 수 있나요?
Could you explain what makes the goods sent deteriorate in quality?

2. 품질 면에서 크게 차이는 없습니다.
There is no difference in quality.

3. 저희 제품들은 100 퍼센트 수공으로 만들어졌기에 조금의 차이는 받아들이셔야 합니다.
You should tolerate a minor difference because our products are manufactured only by hand.


교정내용

A

 

How will space exploration impact humanity? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Space exploration would be a result of overcoming limits that could not have been expected before. So its success would lead people to hope for the future.  

 

B

 

(05/08/22)

 

1. 어떠한 점에서 보낸 상품의 품질이 뒤떨어진다고 생각하시는지 설명해 주실 수 있나요?

Could you explain what makes the goods sent deteriorate in quality?  

 

2. 품질 면에서 크게 차이는 없습니다.

There is no difference in quality.  

 

3. 저희 제품들은 100 퍼센트 수공으로 만들어졌기에 조금의 차이는 받아들이셔야 합니다.

You should tolerate a minor difference because our products are manufactured only by hand.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> You must excuse some differences since our goods are 100 percent handmade.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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