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제 목 Would you like to explore a cave?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-07-09
작성글 A.) Would you like to explore a cave? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

Uncertainty is likely to lead people to scare.
Cave in itself is uncertainty.
So I will not choose to explore a cave.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/05/23)

1. 10 개 이상의 국가로 확장했습니다.
We have extended to 10 or more countries.

2. 저희는 수십 년간 다른 아시아 국가와 사업을 해 오고 있습니다.
We have done business with other Asian countries for tens of years.

3. 프랑스, 스웨덴, 중국 등 30 여 개국에 수출하고 있습니다.
We export to about 30 countries including France, Sweden and China.
교정내용

A.) Would you like to explore a cave? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Uncertainty is likely to lead people to scare. 

Cave in itself is uncertainty.

So I will not choose to explore a cave.   

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/05/23)

 

1. 10 개 이상의 국가로 확장했습니다.

We have extended to 10 or more countries.  

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  We have branched out to over 10 countries.

 

2. 저희는 수십 년간 다른 아시아 국가와 사업을 해 오고 있습니다.

We have done business with other Asian countries for tens of years.

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  We have been doing business with other Asian countries for decades.

 

3. 프랑스, 스웨덴, 중국 등 30 여 개국에 수출하고 있습니다.

We export to about 30 countries including France, Sweden, and China.  


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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