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제 목 What should people do to protect the oceans?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-07-17
작성글 A.) What should people do to protect the oceans? Please elaborate on your answer.

Oceans provide the Earth's all living things with vital sources such as oxygen and food.
They are vulnerable to pollution.
All activities of contaminating oceans must be checked beforehand.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/14/23)

1. 최대한 효율적으로 생산하려 합니다.
We will try to yield as efficiently as possible.

2. 귀사의 무역상대 명단을 볼 수 있을까요?
Could you show the list of your trade partners?

3. 무역상대 명단을 여분으로 갖고 있으신가요?
Do you have extra copies of the trade partner list?
교정내용

A.) What should people do to protect the oceans? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Oceans provide the Earth's all living things with vital sources such as oxygen and food. 

They are vulnerable to pollution. 

All activities of contaminating oceans must be checked beforehand.  

 

     

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/14/23)

 

1. 최대한 효율적으로 생산하려 합니다.

We will try to yield as efficiently as possible.  

   

2. 귀사의 무역상대 명단을 볼 수 있을까요?

Could you show the list of your trade partners?

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  May I see your list of trading partners?

   

3. 무역상대 명단을 여분으로 갖고 있으신가요?

Do you have extra copies of the trade partner list?

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  Do you have an extra copy of your list of trading partners?


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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