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제 목 Should South Korea have changed its traditional way of counting a person’s age?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-07-22
작성글 A) Should South Korea have changed its traditional way of counting a person’s age? Please elaborate on your answer.

In the previous age counting way of Korea, people are aged a year as soon as born,
which makes those born on December 31 become 2 years old
the following day when only one night passes after they are given birth.
Under such a system, someone could feel unsatisfactory.
But it would not be so much as should be changed.

B) Make these sentences into English.

(07/21/23)

1. 저희 회사의 신용도 신뢰할 만합니다.
Our company's credibility is trustworthy.

2. 저희 회사는 빚이 적습니다.
Our company is low in debt.

3. 저희 회사는 빚이 조금 있지만 갚아 나갈 수 있습니다.
Although our company has a little debt, we can pay it back.
교정내용

A) Should South Korea have changed its traditional way of counting a person’s age? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

In the previous age counting way of Korea, people are aged a year as soon as born, 

which makes those born on December 31 become 2 years old 

the following day when only one night passes after they are given birth.

Under such a system, someone could feel unsatisfactory. 

But it would not be so much as should be changed.         

 

B) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/21/23)

 

1. 저희 회사의 신용도 신뢰할 만합니다.

Our company's credibility is trustworthy.  

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2. 저희 회사는 빚이 적습니다.

Our company is low in debt.  

 

 

3. 저희 회사는 빚이 조금 있지만 갚아 나갈 수 있습니다.

Although our company has a little debt, we can pay it back.  

 

 

 • Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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