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제 목 Which of the four precious gemstones would you like to own?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-07-30
작성글 A.) Which of the four precious gemstones would you like to own? Please elaborate on your answer.

The four most precious gemstones are said to be diamond, ruby, emerald, and sapphire.
Although they are rare and expensive, they are all not so much as ordinary stones to me.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(07/27/23)

1. 전망이 어둡다면 투자지출 증가를 멈추거나 축소시켜야 합니다.
When the future looks dark, you should stop increasing investment or curtail it.

2. 패션 산업에 대한 전망이 암울합니다.
The outlook on the fashion industry is gloomy.

3. 경제가 내년이면 회복될 가능성이 웬만큼 있습니다.
The economy has a good possibility of recovery in the next year.
교정내용

A.) Which of the four precious gemstones would you like to own? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The four most precious gemstones are said to be diamond, ruby, emerald, and sapphire. 

Although they are rare and expensive, they are all not so much as ordinary stones to me. 

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/27/23)

 

1. 전망이 어둡다면 투자지출 증가를 멈추거나 축소시켜야 합니다.

When the future looks dark, you should stop increasing investment or curtail it.  

  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

  =>  If our prospects are poor, we should stop adding or even cut investment spending.

 

2. 패션 산업에 대한 전망이 암울합니다.

The outlook on the fashion industry is gloomy.  

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3. 경제가 내년이면 회복될 가능성이 웬만큼 있습니다.

The economy has a good possibility of recovery in the next year.  

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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