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| 제 목 |
What can scientists work out from recording the changes in the exoplanet’s light?  |
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
| 등록일 | 2023-08-21 |
| 작성글 |
A.) What can scientists work out from recording the changes in the exoplanet’s light? Please elaborate on your answer. The ESA launched a satellite with a high precision photometer which measures the intensity of light 4 years ago. It has recorded the changes in the light exoplanets emit. Through the records, Scientists can work out what the exoplanes are made from and their speed of orbit. B.) Make these sentences into English. (08/03/23) 1. 선도적인 컴퓨터 부품 제조 회사입니다. Our company is a leading manufacturer of computer components. 2. 타겟 소비층은 10 대 여자아이들입니다. Target consumers are girls of teenage. 3. 이 제품은 10 대 여성들 사이에서 크게 유행할 것입니다. This product will catch greatly on girls in their teens. |
| 교정내용 |
A.) What can scientists work out from recording the changes in the exoplanet’s light? Please elaborate on your answer.
The ESA launched a satellite with a high precision photometer which measures the intensity of light 4 years ago. It has recorded the changes in the light exoplanets emit. Through the records, Scientists can work out what the exoplanes are made from and their speed of orbit.
=> The ESA launched a satellite with a high-precision photometer that measures the intensity of light 4 years ago. It has recorded the changes in the light exoplanets emit. Through the records, Scientists can work out what the exoplanets are made from and their speed of orbit.
B.) Make these sentences into English.
(08/03/23)
1. 선도적인 컴퓨터 부품 제조 회사입니다. Our company is a leading manufacturer of computer components. ✔
2. 타겟 소비층은 10 대 여자아이들입니다. Target consumers are girls of teenage. => Our target demographic is teenage girls.
3. 이 제품은 10 대 여성들 사이에서 크게 유행할 것입니다. This product will catch greatly on girls in their teens. ✔
• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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