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제 목 Why is Chester Zoo one of the world’s leading zoos for conservation work?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-08-21
작성글 A.) Why is Chester Zoo one of the world’s leading zoos for conservation work? Please elaborate on your answer.

Chester Zoo was established in Britain ninety years ago.
Since then, it has been specialized in conservation work for endangered animals.
This seems sure to have led it to be one of the world's leading zoos.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(08/11/23)

1. 도움이 필요하신가요?
Can I help you?

2. 도움이 필요하신가요?
Do you need any help?

3. 외주에 대해 얘기하고 싶으면 누구를 찾아야 하나요?
If I need to discuss outsourcing, who should I consult with?
교정내용

A.) Why is Chester Zoo one of the world’s leading zoos for conservation work? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Chester Zoo was established in Britain ninety years ago. 

Since then, it has been specialized in conservation work for endangered animals.

This seems sure to have led it to be one of the world's leading zoos.   

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(08/11/23)

 

1. 도움이 필요하신가요?

Can I help you?  

 

2. 도움이 필요하신가요?

Do you need any help?  

 

 

3. 외주에 대해 얘기하고 싶으면 누구를 찾아야 하나요?

If I need to discuss outsourcing, who should I consult with?  

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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