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제 목 How can wildfires be prevented?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-08-23
작성글 A.) How can wildfires be prevented? Please elaborate on your answer.

Wildfires happen due to natural powers such as lightning or high temperature.
Natural phenomenon is beyond prevention. It would be a matter of loss reduction.
Decreasing the density of forest could be thought of reducing loss from wildfires.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(08/18/23)

1. 공장 안내 일정은 언제쯤 잡으면 되나요?
When will be the appropriate date to tour the factory?

2. 수요일 2 시는 어떻습니까?
How about two o'clock on Wednesday?

3. 어느 요일이 가장 편하신가요?
Which day is most convenient?
교정내용

A.) How can wildfires be prevented? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Wildfires happen due to natural powers such as lightning or high temperature.

Natural phenomenon is beyond prevention. It would be a matter of loss reduction. 

Decreasing the density of forest could be thought of reducing loss from wildfires. 

 

=>  Wildfires happen due to natural powers such as lightning or high temperatures.

The natural phenomenon is beyond prevention. It would be a matter of loss reduction. 

Decreasing the density of forests could be thought of as reducing loss from wildfires. ​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(08/18/23)

 

1. 공장 안내 일정은 언제쯤 잡으면 되나요?

When will be the appropriate date to tour the factory?  

 

2. 수요일 2 시는 어떻습니까?

How about two o'clock on Wednesday?  

 

3. 어느 요일이 가장 편하신가요?

Which day is most convenient?   


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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