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제 목 What can be done to lessen the negative impact that large cruise ships have on the environment?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-08-25
작성글 A.) What can be done to lessen the negative impact that large cruise ships have on the environment? Please elaborate on your answer.

A large cruise ship can be likened to a densely populated town,
Which means that it could be the source of large volumes of waste.
Banning dumping the of waste would be the first step to lessen the negative impact
on the environment.
Emission of sewage must be also prevented.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

Sentences to be translated are not provided.

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A.) What can be done to lessen the negative impact that large cruise ships have on the environment? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

A large cruise ship can be likened to a densely populated town,

Which means that it could be the source of large volumes of waste.

Banning dumping the waste would be the first step to lessen the negative impact 

on the environment. 

Emission of sewage must be also prevented.  

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

Sentences to be translated are not provided.

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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