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제 목 What should be done to the bones recovered from the wreck?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-08-30
작성글 A.) What should be done to the bones recovered from the wreck? Please elaborate on your answer.

Vasa was a warship that toppled near the harbor of Stockholm soon after its maiden voyage started in 1628.
Then many people on board drowned.
The bones were found around the shipwreck when it was raised.
They must be the remains of victims who died from the Vasa toppling.
So they must be let to rest in peace with a solemn ritual.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(08/28/23)

1. 안내 책자입니다.
This is a guidebook.

2. 오리엔테이션 비디오를 보겠습니다.
I will watch an orientation video.

3. 공장의 부지 면적은 약 6,000 제곱 미터입니다.
The factory site is about 6,000 square meters wide.

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A.) What should be done to the bones recovered from the wreck? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Vasa was a warship that toppled near the harbor of Stockholm soon after its maiden voyage started in 1628. 

Then many people on board drowned. 

The bones were found around the shipwreck when it was raised. 

They must be the remains of victims who died from the Vasa toppling. 

So they must be let to rest in peace with a solemn ritual.   

  

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(08/28/23)

 

1. 안내 책자입니다. 

This is a guidebook.  

=>  This is the brochure.

 

2. 오리엔테이션 비디오를 보겠습니다.

I will watch an orientation video.  

 

3. 공장의 부지 면적은 약 6,000 제곱 미터입니다.

The factory site is about 6,000 square meters wide.  

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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