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교정강사 Vanessa(D)
등록일 2021-05-23
작성글 The Wendes day is Buddha's Birthday.
I play with my little brother, my friend and i know sisters.
We play very happy.
We do Hide-and-sick and ride long board.
It's very fun and exciting.
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Today is Wednesday and it's Buddha's birthday. I played with my little brother, my friend, and sisters that I know. We played very happily.

 We did hide-and-seek and we rode the longboard. It was fun and exciting!  

 

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