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교정강사 Glaze(D)O
등록일 2023-09-14
작성글 Today, I played with my friends after school with baordgames.
We played chess for 8times and I took 2 hours because I and my friend are moved really carefully.
And the score was 5 and 3 and I won the game.
So, I am very exciting now.
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