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교정강사 Glaze(D)O
등록일 2023-09-16
작성글 Today, I met my friend at the downtown and played computer games for 3hours.
At first, we played Valorant that kind of shooting game.
Our team won all round. And I tried to play new game with my friend.
The game was FiFA ONLINE4. That was a kind of soccer game.
I made a team and played soccer with my friend.
It was too short to play them all because it was very very fun.
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