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제 목 | Korea soccer |
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교정강사 | Stella(D)O |
등록일 | 2023-10-21 |
작성글 | Our Korean people really love soccer. You love soccer too? I`m really love soccer. It is exiting to score a goal. And it is fun too to watching the soccer. In Korea there is Son,Lee Gong-In , and there was Cha Bum-kun and Park Ji-sung. I`m very proud of Korean soccer player. And Tottenham with Son Heung-min is the top of the league. How about Philippines? |
교정내용 |
The Korean people really love soccer. Do you love soccer too? I really love soccer. It is very exciting to score a goal. And it is fun to watch soccer. In Korea, we have soccer players: Son, Lee Gong-In, Cha Bum-kun, and Park Ji-sung. I`m very proud of them. Tottenham with Son Heung-min is at the top of the league. How about in the Philippines? |
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