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제 목 | Can Italy handle the migrant problem on its own? |
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교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
등록일 | 2023-10-21 |
작성글 |
A.) Can Italy handle the migrant problem on its own? Please elaborate on your answer. The migrant problem will not be able to be solved only by a country where migrants land first. So the EU must handle the problem. B.) Make these sentences into English. (10/16/23) 1. 바꿔 말하자면, 중국은 한국과 점점 더 닮아가기 때문에 촉망되는 시장입니다. In other words, as it is getting more and more alike with Korea, China is a promising market. 2. 시장은 무르익었습니다. 즉 많은 이익을 창출해 낼 수 있다는 얘기죠. The market has grown enough, which means that a lot of profits could be earned. 3. 그들과 우리의 서비스를 비교해 보면 우리 회사가 더 월등하다는 것을 알 수 있을 것입니다. Comparing our service with theirs, you can realize our company's prominence. |
교정내용 |
A.) Can Italy handle the migrant problem on its own? Please elaborate on your answer.
The migrant problem will not be able to be solved only by a country where migrants land first. So the EU must handle the problem. ✔
B.) Make these sentences into English.
(10/16/23)
1. 바꿔 말하자면, 중국은 한국과 점점 더 닮아가기 때문에 촉망되는 시장입니다. In other words, as it is getting more and more alike with Korea, China is a promising market. • Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it. => To put it in another way, China is a promising market because it's becoming more like Korea.
2. 시장은 무르익었습니다. 즉 많은 이익을 창출해 낼 수 있다는 얘기죠. The market has grown enough, which means that a lot of profits could be earned. ✔
3. 그들과 우리의 서비스를 비교해 보면 우리 회사가 더 월등하다는 것을 알 수 있을 것입니다. Comparing our service with theirs, you can realize our company's prominence. ✔ • Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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