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| 제 목 |
Why are Great Danes expensive pets?  |
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
| 등록일 | 2023-10-22 |
| 작성글 |
A.) Why are Great Danes expensive pets? Please elaborate on your answer. The Great Danes are a large breed of dogs that are not aggressive. They eat a lot of food and require a large space, which costs a lot of money. Those who can endure the expense can live with them. That might be why they are called expensive pets. B.) Make these sentences into English. (10/20/23) 1. 우리 제품으로 절감할 수 있는 전기량을 보여줍니다. This shows the amount of electricity which can be saved by our products. 2. 이 원형도표는 우리 주요 고객이 20 대 여성이라는 것을 보여줍니다. This pie chart shows that our main customers are women in their twenties. 3. 이 선은 총 이윤을 나타내고 이 붉은 선은 미불 부채를 나타냅니다. This line shows the total profit while this red line shows the debt to pay. |
| 교정내용 |
A.) Why are Great Danes expensive pets? Please elaborate on your answer. The Great Danes are a large breed of dogs that are not aggressive. They eat a lot of food and require a large space, which costs a lot of money. Those who can endure the expense can live with them. That might be why they are called expensive pets. ✔
B.) Make these sentences into English.
(10/20/23)
1. 우리 제품으로 절감할 수 있는 전기량을 보여줍니다. This shows the amount of electricity which can be saved by our products. ✔
2. 이 원형도표는 우리 주요 고객이 20 대 여성이라는 것을 보여줍니다. This pie chart shows that our main customers are women in their twenties. ✔
3. 이 선은 총 이윤을 나타내고 이 붉은 선은 미불 부채를 나타냅니다. This line shows the total profit while this red line shows the debt to pay. ✔
• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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