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제 목 Why is it important to study asteroids?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-10-25
작성글 A.) Why is it important to study asteroids? Please elaborate on your answer.

Asteroids are said to be leftover rocks from when the Solar System's planets first formed.
They also circle the Sun like planets and their orbits could meet the Earth's orbit,
which might arouse severe impact on the Earth.
Studying asteroids would help to understand the Earth origin and prepare for impacts.
That would be why it is important to study asteroids.

(10/23/23)

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(10/23/23)

1. 좋은 리더십이 특별히 중요합니다
Good leadership is especially important.

2. 소비자와 생산자 간의 신뢰의 중요성을 강조하고 싶습니다.
I would like to underline the importance of trust between consumers and manufacturers.

3. 대안이 없다는 것을 강조하고 싶습니다.
I would like to emphasize that there is no alternative.
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A.) Why is it important to study asteroids? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Asteroids are said to be leftover rocks from when the Solar System's planets first formed. 

They also circle the Sun like planets and their orbits could meet the Earth's orbit, 

which might arouse severe impact on the Earth.

Studying asteroids would help to understand the Earth origin and prepare for impacts.

That would be why it is important to study asteroids.     

 

=>  Asteroids are said to be leftover rocks from when the Solar System's planets first formed. 

They also circle the Sun like planets and their orbits could meet the Earth's orbit, 

which might have a severe impact on the Earth.

Studying asteroids would help to understand the Earth's origin and prepare for impacts.

That is why it is important to study asteroids.     ​ 

 

(10/23/23)

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(10/23/23)

 

1. 좋은 리더십이 특별히 중요합니다

   Good leadership is especially important.  

 

2. 소비자와 생산자 간의 신뢰의 중요성을 강조하고 싶습니다.

   I would like to underline the importance of trust between consumers and manufacturers. 

 

3. 대안이 없다는 것을 강조하고 싶습니다.

  I would like to emphasize that there is no alternative.  


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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