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제 목 What are the best ways to celebrate Gorilla Day?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-11-05
작성글 A.) What are the best ways to celebrate Gorilla Day? Please elaborate on your answer.

Gorillas are apes and primates like humans.
They are said to share around 95% of their DNA with humans,
which means that those two species might be split from a common ancestor.
Designating the Gorilla Day would aim at arousing people to get aware of gorillas' endangerment.
So reprimanding and penalizing poachers would be one of the best ways to celebrate it.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(11/03/23)

1. 우리가 상당한 변화를 불러 일으켜야 할 필요를 간단히 요약한 것입니다.
This is a summary of why we arouse considerable changes.

2. 이 세가지 키워드를 기억하세요. 자본, 투자와 수익.
Remember these three keywords: capital, investment, and profit.

3. 이 주제에 관해서는 이게 전부입니다.
This is all about this theme.
교정내용

A.) What are the best ways to celebrate Gorilla Day? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Gorillas are apes and primates like humans. 

They are said to share around 95% of their DNA with humans, 

which means that those two species might be split from a common ancestor.

Designating the Gorilla Day would aim at arousing people to get aware of gorillas' endangerment.  

So reprimanding and penalizing poachers would be one of the best ways to celebrate it.   

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(11/03/23)

 

1. 우리가 상당한 변화를 불러 일으켜야 할 필요를 간단히 요약한 것입니다.

This is a summary of why we arouse considerable changes.   

 

2. 이 세가지 키워드를 기억하세요. 자본, 투자와 수익.

Remember these three keywords: capital, investment, and profit.  

 

3. 이 주제에 관해서는 이게 전부입니다.

This is all about this theme.  

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

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