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제 목 Nov. 7th Homework by Taegyu
교정강사 Happy(C)
등록일 2023-11-07
작성글 A. How can after school programs improve your life as a student?
After school programs improve my life from many ways. They are fun, so I can be more positive. If they are about sports, they can improve my health! Also, they can make me smarter(In my opinion).

B. Make these sentences into English.
(11/07/23)
1. 피자야. 우리 피자 먹을래?
It's pizza. Shall we eat some pizza?
2. 우리 도시락 싸왔잖아.피자는 다음에 먹자.
We packed our lunch. Let's eat pizza next time.
3. 안타깝다.
It's so sad.
교정내용

A. How can after school programs improve your life as a student?

After school programs improve my life from many ways. They are fun, so I can be more positive. If they are about sports, they can improve my health! Also, they can make me smarter(In my opinion).

Corrected: 

After-school programs improve my life in many ways. They are fun, so I can be more positive. If they are about sports, they can improve my health! Also, they can make me smarter (in my opinion).

B. Make these sentences into English.

(11/07/23)

1. 피자야. 우리 피자 먹을래?

It's pizza. Shall we eat some pizza?✔

2. 우리 도시락 싸왔잖아.피자는 다음에 먹자.

We packed our lunch. Let's eat pizza next time. ✔​

 

3. 안타깝다.

It's so sad. ✔​

Thank you so much for answering your homework Tae Gyu. Keep it up!​

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