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| 제 목 |
Winter |
|---|---|
| 교정강사 | Stella(D)O |
| 등록일 | 2023-11-11 |
| 작성글 | Now in Korea the winter is coming! The weather is getting colder and colder. The leaves on the tree ran out. I like winter very much! Because I`m like to skiing. Their is a cold wind but I sweat a lot. Sometime when it get snow, We can play snowball fight, and make snowman. And also I don`t like summer, because it is very hot. So I like winter! |
| 교정내용 |
Winter
Now in Korea, the winter is coming! The weather is getting colder and colder. The leaves on the tree ran out. I like winter very much! Because I`m into skiing. There is a cold wind, but I sweat a lot. Sometimes, when it gets snowy, we can play snowball fights and make snowman. And also, I don`t like summer because it is very hot. So I like winter! |
| 목록 |
