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제 목 Korea's shortcomings
교정강사 Stella(D)O
등록일 2023-11-16
작성글 1. losing oneself in one's work


half of a day, more than half of a week, or more than half of a person's life,
But compared to its importance, it's relatively important to know that
There is a lack of serious consideration and the structure of the times and the surrounding situation do not allow it either.
"I'm busy making a living."

Most of the work within the capitalist social system
corporate interests instead of ethics
It exists for the satisfaction of one's superiors instead of a sense of duty.
Furthermore, the fair price for one's intellectual and mental work is also the same
Much is being exploited by capitalists.
So in the work itself, in the process of allocating its costs
inevitably lose oneself
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Korea's Shortcomings

 

1. Losing oneself in one's work

 

 

Half of a day, more than half of a week, or more than half of a person's life,

But compared to its importance, it's relatively important to know that

There is a lack of serious consideration, and the structure of the times and the surrounding situation do not allow it either.

"I'm busy making a living."

 

Most of the work is within the capitalist social system.

corporate interests instead of ethics.

It exists for the satisfaction of one's superiors instead of a sense of duty.

Furthermore, the fair price for one's intellectual and mental work is also the same.

Much is being exploited by capitalists.

So in the work itself, in the process of allocating its costs,

inevitably lose oneself. ​ 

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