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제 목 Can the former boss of a big company be a good prime minister or president?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-11-16
작성글 A.) Can the former boss of a big company be a good prime minister or president? Please elaborate on your answer.

Business and government are different in size, mission, service, and purpose.
So a good boss of a company can't be said to become a good leader of a government.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(10/15/23)

1. 이 멋있는 디자인은 10 대의 눈을 사로 잡을 수 있을 겁니다.
This delectable design will be able to attract teenagers' eyes.

2. 그 디자인의 영감은 앤디 워홀로부터 왔습니다.
The inspiration of the design originated from Andy Warhol.

3. 이것은 패션디자이너 에릭 브라운이 디자인한 겁니다.
This is what a fashion designer, Eric Brown designed.
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A.) Can the former boss of a big company be a good prime minister or president? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Business and government are different in size, mission, service, and purpose.

So a good boss of a company can't be said to become a good leader of a government.  

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(10/15/23)

 

1. 이 멋있는 디자인은 10 대의 눈을 사로 잡을 수 있을 겁니다.

This delectable design will be able to attract teenagers' eyes.  

  

2. 그 디자인의 영감은 앤디 워홀로부터 왔습니다.

The inspiration of the design originated from Andy Warhol.

=>  The design was inspired by Andy Warhol.

 

3. 이것은 패션디자이너 에릭 브라운이 디자인한 겁니다.

This is what a fashion designer, Eric Brown designed. 

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  This was designed by fashion designer Eric Brown.

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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