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교정강사 Stella(D)O
등록일 2023-11-19
작성글 I think one or two week ago I was write about winter. But yesterday, it was snowing!!!! When I was woke up and watch outside of window, I can see white world! It`s very wonderful. I want to play in snow with my friend, but I was had to go math exam. I love the Korea because there is four weathers. when the snow comes one more time, I will play with my friend. I like snow!!
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Snow 

 

I think one or two weeks ago I wrote about winter. But yesterday, it was snowing!!!! When I woke up and looked outside the window, I could see the white world! It`s very wonderful. I want to play in the snow with my friend, but I need to take the math exam. I love Korea because there is four seasons. When the snow comes one more time, I will play with my friend. I like snow!! 

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