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| 제 목 |
What was Redonda like before the restoration project in 2016?  |
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| 교정강사 | Colleen(C) |
| 등록일 | 2023-11-21 |
| 작성글 |
A.) What was Redonda like before the restoration project in 2016? Please elaborate on your answer. Goats ate all plants and rats fed on seabirds' eggs and chicks, which got the islanders to look at barren waste before the 2016 project. B.) Make these sentences into English. (11/17/23) 1. 저희 제품은 같은 가격의 다른 제품보다 더 품질이 좋습니다. Our products have better quality than others of the same price. 2. 저희가 주요 타켓으로 삼은 대상은 고소득 성인 여성입니다. We mainly targets at female adults with high income. 3. 목표 고객의 수는 제한적이지만 높은 가격이 손실을 만회할 겁니다. Although the number of target customers is restricted, high prices will make up for the loss. |
| 교정내용 |
A.) What was Redonda like before the restoration project in 2016? Please elaborate on your answer. Goats ate all plants and rats fed on seabirds' eggs and chicks, which got the islanders to look at barren waste before the 2016 project. ✔ B.) Make these sentences into English. (11/17/23) 1. 저희 제품은 같은 가격의 다른 제품보다 더 품질이 좋습니다. Our products have better quality than others of the same price. ✔ 2. 저희가 주요 타켓으로 삼은 대상은 고소득 성인 여성입니다. We mainly targets at female adults with high income. => We've set female adults in the higher income bracket as our primary target. 3. 목표 고객의 수는 제한적이지만 높은 가격이 손실을 만회할 겁니다. Although the number of target customers is restricted, high prices will make up for the loss. ✔
• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically. |
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