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| 제 목 |
It getting cold. |
|---|---|
| 교정강사 | Stella(D)O |
| 등록일 | 2023-11-25 |
| 작성글 | In Korea, it is perfectly winter. Today`s lowest temperature was -7 degree. I can see little bit ice in river that is in front of my house. When it`s get colder and colder, I want to skiing in skiing ground. And my brother want to take sled in the snow. And also i want to play on the river. When it`s getting ice and it`s getting harder, I can play anything on there. It`s really fun. Winter is very nice weather. I don`t have any sweet, nd aiso I can play many many fun things. Winter, please come quickly!! |
| 교정내용 |
It's getting cold.
In Korea, it is perfectly cold. Today`s lowest temperature was -7 degrees. I can see a little bit of ice in the river that is in front of my house. When it`s getting colder and colder, I want to ski in the snow. And my brother wants to go sled in the snow. And also, I want to play on the river. When it`s getting cold and it`s getting harder, I can play anything on there. It`s really fun. Winter is very nice weather. I don`t have any sweat, and I can also play many fun things. Winter, please come quickly!! |
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