1. 안녕 , 심순아 . 방학 어땠니?

    Hi. Shim Soon. How was your vacation?

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>    Hi, Simsoon. How was your vacation?​

2. 멋졌어. 나는 뉴욕에 있는 브래드의 집에 갔었어.

    Wonderful. I went to Bread's house in New York.

=>  It was wonderful. I went to my friend Brad's house in New York.

3. 디즈니 월드도 갔었어?

     Did you go to Disney World?   ✔

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• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.