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제 목 Why was it important for Germany to offer an official apology to the people who lived in two of its
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-12-09
작성글 A.) Why was it important for Germany to offer an official apology to the people who lived in two of its former African colonies? Please elaborate on your answer.

Germany set up colonies in southwest and east Africa in late 1800's.
To control them, Germans committed atrocities to the natives.
Their descendants would be forever sorry for their torments which must be apologized for.
Without sincere apology, no progress between the two could be anticipated.
That would be why Germany's official apology is important. .


B.) Make these sentences into English.

(11/29/23)

1. 2 천 대 이상 되는 주문은 무료배송 해 드립니다.
Placing an order of 2000 or more units would cost no charge for delivery.

2. 40 대의 공짜 샘플을 드리겠습니다.
40 units of free samples would be awarded.

3. 테스트가 끝나면 제품의 우수성이 충분히 입증될 것입니다.
The product's superiority will be fully proved through a test.

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A.) Why was it important for Germany to offer an official apology to the people who lived in two of its former African colonies? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Germany set up colonies in southwest and east Africa in late 1800's.

To control them, Germans committed atrocities to the natives.

Their descendants would be forever sorry for their torments which must be apologized for.

Without sincere apology, no progress between the two could be anticipated. 

That would be why Germany's official apology is important.         .

 

=>  Germany set up colonies in southwest and east Africa in the late 1800's.

To control them, Germans committed atrocities against the natives.

Their descendants would be forever sorry for their torments which must be apologized for.

Without a sincere apology, no progress between the two could be anticipated. 

That is why Germany's official apology is important.        

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(11/29/23)

 

1. 2 천 대 이상 되는 주문은 무료배송 해 드립니다.

Placing an order of 2000 or more units would cost no charge for delivery.  

 

2. 40 대의 공짜 샘플을 드리겠습니다.

40 units of free samples would be awarded.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  We will offer 40 samples for free.

 

3. 테스트가 끝나면 제품의 우수성이 충분히 입증될 것입니다.

The product's superiority will be fully proved through a test. 

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• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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