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제 목 Park Heyin(12/22/23)
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-12-22
작성글 1.아빠가 상품으로 받으신거야. 나는 아빠가 자랑스러웠어.
Dad got it as prize. I was proud of my dad.

2.퍼레이드도 봤니?
Did you see the parade?

3.물론이지. 모두 아름답더라. 우리는 그 사람들이랑 사진도 찍었어.
Of course. They were all beautiful. we even took pictures with them.

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Dear Colleen

Merry Christmas teacher
Do you believe in Santa? I believe in Santa. because there's Santa village in Finland.
This surprising.
Have a great Christmas teacher.

From Hey in


교정내용

1.아빠가 상품으로 받으신거야. 나는 아빠가 자랑스러웠어.

   Dad got it as prize.  I was proud of my dad.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

 =>  My father won a prize. I was proud of him.

 

2.퍼레이드도 봤니?

   Did you see the parade?  

3.물론이지. 모두 아름답더라. 우리는 그 사람들이랑 사진도 찍었어.

   Of course. They were all beautiful.  we even took pictures with them.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=>  Of course, we did. The people were all beautiful. We took a picture with them. 


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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Dear Colleen

 

Merry Christmas teacher

Do you believe in Santa? I believe in Santa. because there's Santa village in Finland.

This surprising.

 Have a great Christmas teacher.

                                                

              From Hey in

 

 

Hello there Hye In!

 

Of course i believe that there's Santa because he used to give me some presents when I was your age. I was so happy about it.
Stay sweet and kind, Hye In!
Merry Christmas to you abd to your family! Enjoy the holiday season!.

 

 

 

 

 

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