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제 목 Why was it necessary to drill three small pipes into through the rockfall that trapped the men?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2023-12-29
작성글 A.) Why was it necessary to drill three small pipes into through the rockfall that trapped the men? Please elaborate on your answer.

The rockfall blocked the trapped space from being exposed to air and sunlight.
But much time was taken to get it away.
So drilling three pipes was temporarily required to provide oxygen and food
before the rockfall was taken away.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(12/22/23)

1. 요즘처럼 어려운 경제상황에서도 희망을 찾아야 합니다.
We have to find hope despite the recent difficult economy.

2. 우리 사업이 전례 없는 호황을 누리고 있습니다.
Our business is in unprecedented boom.

3. 이 호황기는 모두에게 유리한 상황을 만들 것입니다.
This up-phase will build a favorable situation for all.
교정내용

A.) Why was it necessary to drill three small pipes into through the rockfall that trapped the men? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The rockfall blocked the trapped space from being exposed to air and sunlight.

But much time was taken to get it away.

So drilling three pipes was temporarily required to provide oxygen and food     

before the rockfall was taken away.  

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/22/23)

 

1. 요즘처럼 어려운 경제상황에서도 희망을 찾아야 합니다.

 We have to find hope despite the recent difficult economy. 

  

2. 우리 사업이 전례 없는 호황을 누리고 있습니다.

 Our business is in unprecedented boom.  

 

3. 이 호황기는 모두에게 유리한 상황을 만들 것입니다.

 This up-phase will build a favorable situation for all.   

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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