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제 목 Jan. 14th homework by Taegyu
교정강사 Happy(C)
등록일 2024-01-11
작성글 A. Name some disasters that you know of.
There are some disasters:
1. Earthquake: Earthquake is that the land is shaking. It could be just shaking a little if it's weak, but if it is strong, the land can be cracked!
2. Typhoon: Typhoon is the heavy wind with heavy rain. Typhoon often causes flood.
3. Drought: Drought is that there is no(or little) rain. With drought, land may splited.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(01/11/24)
1. 그녀가 울고 있어. 왕비가 그녀를 쫓아냈어.
She's crying. The queen threw her out.
2. 그런데, 일곱 난쟁이들은 어디에 있지?
By the way, where are the 7 dwarfs?
3. 그들은 무대에 곧 나올 거야.
We're going to meet them soon.
교정내용

A. Name some disasters that you know of.

There are some disasters:

1. Earthquake: Earthquake is that the land is shaking. It could be just shaking a little if it's weak, but if it is strong, the land can be cracked!

Better: An earthquake is defined as trembling in the ground. If it's weak, it might simply be trembling a little, but if it's strong, the land could crack!

2. Typhoon: Typhoon is the heavy wind with heavy rain. Typhoon often causes flood.

Corrected: Typhoon is the heavy wind with heavy rain. Typhoons often cause floods.

3. Drought: Drought is that there is no(or little) rain. With drought, land may splited.

Corrected: Drought means that there is no (or little) rain. With drought, land may be split.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(01/11/24)

1. 그녀가 울고 있어. 왕비가 그녀를 쫓아냈어.

She's crying. The queen threw her out.

2. 그런데, 일곱 난쟁이들은 어디에 있지?

By the way, where are the 7 dwarfs?

3. 그들은 무대에 곧 나올 거야.

We're going to meet them soon.

Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep studying!​ 

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