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제 목 What makes a country democratic?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2024-01-16
작성글 A.) What makes a country democratic? Please elaborate on your answer.

Democracy is said to be drived from an ancient Greek word 'demokratia' which means 'rule by the people'.
People's participation will be a critical point to be a democratic country.
So the first step must be eliminating discouragements against people's participation.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(01/15/24)

1. 귀사의 견적가격의 유효기간을 정확히 명시해 주세요.
Please specify the expiration date of the estimated price.

2. 제가 드린 견적가격은 10 월말까지 유효합니다.
What I quoted will be valid by the end of October.

3. 귀사의 가격표에 유효기간이 명시되어 있지 않습니다.
The term of validity is not specified on your price table.
교정내용

A.) What makes a country democratic? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Democracy is said to be derived from an ancient Greek word 'demokratia' which means  'rule by the people'.

People's participation will be a critical point to be a democratic country.

So the first step must be eliminating discouragements against people's participation.  ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/15/24)

 

1. 귀사의 견적가격의 유효기간을 정확히 명시해 주세요.

 Please specify the expiration date of the estimated price. ✔️

​2. 제가 드린 견적가격은 10 월말까지 유효합니다.

What I quoted will be valid by the end of October.  ✔️

 

3. 귀사의 가격표에 유효기간이 명시되어 있지 않습니다.

The term of validity is not specified on your price table.  ✔️

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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