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작성글 What is the greatest invention of the year?
It is eco sneakers.
-내일이 어버이 날이잖아.너는 카네이션 준비했니?
It is Parents day tomorrow. Did you prepare carnation?
-이런! 깜빡 했어.나도 사야겠다.
Oh! I forget it. I have to buy it too.
-그런데 돈이 없네.
But I don`t have money.
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What is the greatest invention of the year?

-It is eco sneakers. ​★★★​

 

-내일이 어버이 날이잖아.너는 카네이션 준비했니?

-It is Parent​'s day tomorrow. Did you prepare ​the carnation? ⇒ Tomorrow is Parent's day. Did you prepare the carnations?

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-이런! 깜빡 했어.나도 사야겠다. ​

-Oh! I forget it. I have to buy it too. ⇒⇒ Oops! I forgot. I have to buy them, too. 

=> Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.​​

-그런데 돈이 없네. 

-But I don`t have money.⇒⇒ But I have no money. Can I borrow some money?

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

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