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제 목 Why do you think the daughter was given a title?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2024-01-30
작성글 A.) Why do you think the daughter was given a title? Please elaborate on your answer.

In ordinary times, a title would be given to a person when he or she needs authority or charisma.
So if the most beloved child could be such kind of title, its awarding would mean to show the daughter to be a prominent successor.
However I think that it can't be a title but just a flattery because she is 10 year old child who could not be an object of a discussion on political succession.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(01/29/24)

1. 우리 회사로서는 최선을 다한 가격입니다.
This is the best price which we could propose.

2. 귀사와의 오랜 거래를 고려해서 받아들이겠습니다.
Considering the long business with you, we will accept it.

3. 가격에 뭐가 포함되어 잇나요?
What does the price cover?
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A.) Why do you think the daughter was given a title? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

In ordinary times,  a title would be given  to a person when he or she needs authority  or charisma.

So if  the most beloved child could be such kind of title, its awarding would mean to show the daughter to be a prominent successor.

However I think that it can't be a title  but  just a  flattery  because she  is  10 year old child who could not be an object of a discussion on poilitical succession. 

 

=>  In ordinary times,  a title would be given to a person when he or she needs authority or charisma.

So if the most beloved child could be such kind of title, its awarding would mean showing the daughter to be a prominent successor.

However, I think that it can't be a title but just flattery because she is  a 10-year-old child who could not be an object of a discussion on political succession. 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/29/24)

 

1. 우리 회사로서는 최선을 다한 가격입니다.

 This is the best price which we could propose. ✔️

​2. 귀사와의 오랜 거래를 고려해서 받아들이겠습니다.

Considering the long business with you, we will accept it.  ✔️

​3. 가격에 뭐가 포함되어 잇나요?

 What does the price cover?  ✔️

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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