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제 목 How can Guinea benefit from mining its high-grade iron-ore?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2024-02-06
작성글 A.) How can Guinea benefit from mining its high-grade iron-ore? Please elaborate on your answer.

The global restriction of carbon emission urge companies to renovate their production.
High-grade iron-ore can give the steel industry companies because they can use new technology of carbon emission reduction.
So the demand for high-grade iron will be anticipated to incresae sharply, which would raise the price of Guinea iron.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(02/05/24)

1. 귀사의 최종가격을 바꾸지 않는 이상 거래를 더 이상 진행할 수 없을 것 같습니다.
We will not be able to proceed with the trade as long as you don't change the final price.

2. 외국 제품들은 우리 제품의 품질과 가까워지면서 가격면에서 이기고 있습니다.
As they have come near our products' quality, foreign products get competitive in price.

3. 대량 생산으로 규모의 경제를 가져올 수 있습니다.
Mass production can bring economics of scale.
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A.) How can Guinea benefit from mining its high-grade iron-ore? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The global restriction of carbon emission urge companies  to renovate  their production.

High-grade iron-ore can give the steel industry companies because  they can use new technology  of  carbon emission reduction.

So the demand for high-grade iron will be anticipated to incresae sharply, which would raise the price of Guinea iron.

 

=>  The global restriction of carbon emissions urges companies to renovate their production.

High-grade iron-ore can give the steel industry companies because they can use new technology of carbon emission reduction.

So the demand for high-grade iron will is anticipated to increase sharply, which would raise the price of Guinea iron.

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/05/24)

 

1. 귀사의 최종가격을 바꾸지 않는 이상 거래를 더 이상 진행할 수 없을 것 같습니다.

We will not be able to proceed with the trade as long as you don't change the final price.  ✔️

​2. 외국 제품들은 우리 제품의 품질과 가까워지면서 가격면에서 이기고 있습니다.

As they have come near our products' quality, foreign products get competitive in price. ✔️

​3. 대량 생산으로 규모의 경제를 가져올 수 있습니다.

Mass production can bring  economics of scale.

=>  Mass production can bring economies of scale.​

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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