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제 목 Do you believe in bad omen?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2024-02-13
작성글 A.) Do you believe in bad omen? Please elaborate on your answer.

Events or accidents are the result of combination of various elements or components.
Each element would happen either simultaneously or sequentially.
Even before all composing elements are made, a certain atmosphere can be felt.
So bad omen would not be what could not be thought.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(02/07/24)

1. 제조 과정을 더 효율적으로 만들어줄 수 있는 기술에 투자해야 합니다.
We must invest in the technology which can make the production more efficient.

2. 그 가격을 고집하시면 더 이상 거래하기 어렵습니다.
As long as you insist on the price, it will be difficult to trade anymore.

3. 품질과 보증 서비스를 감안하면 가격이 그리 높지도 않습니다.
Considering the quality and the guaranteed service, the price is not so high.

교정내용

A.) Do you believe in bad omen? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Events or accidents are the result of combination of various elements or components.

Each element would happen either simultaneously or sequentially.

Even before all composing elements are made,  a certain atmosphere can be felt.

So bad omen would not be what could not be thought. ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/07/24)

 

1. 제조 과정을 더 효율적으로 만들어줄 수 있는 기술에 투자해야 합니다.

We must invest in the technology which can make the production more efficient.  ✔️

​2. 그 가격을 고집하시면 더 이상 거래하기 어렵습니다.

As long as you insist on the price, it would be difficult to trade anymore.  ✔️

​3. 품질과 보증 서비스를 감안하면 가격이 그리 높지도 않습니다.

Considering the quality and the guaranteed service, the price is not so high. ✔️

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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