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제 목 Taegyu's homework
교정강사 Happy(C)
등록일 2024-02-13
작성글 A. Make sentences with the following words: PHASE / CYCLE / MYSTERY
Not only the moon, but also some more planets have phases.(Venus's phases are the most famous with its phases except the moon.)
RPS(Rock Papaer Scissors) has a cycle. R wins S, S wins P, and P wins R.
This is mystery. HOW did he do that??
B. Make these sentences into English.
(02/08/24)
1. 스노쿨링! 나는 수영 뿐 아니라 스노쿨링도 다 해보고 싶어.나는 산호에 매우 관심이 많아.
Snorkeling! I want to not only swim, but also snorkel. I'm really interested in corals.
2. 멋있다! 정말 굉장한 소리처럼 들린다. 나는 수영은 좋아.하지만 깊은 물은 두려워.
Cool! It sounds amazing. I like swimming, but I'm afraid at water.
3. 그럼 나는 계곡에 있는게 더 낫겠다.
Then I would be better in the valley.
교정내용

A. Make sentences with the following words: PHASE / CYCLE / MYSTERY

Not only the moon, but also some more planets have phases.(Venus's phases are the most famous with its phases except the moon.)

RPS(Rock Papaer Scissors) has a cycle. R wins S, S wins P, and P wins R.

This is mystery. HOW did he do that??

Corrected: This is a mystery. How did he do that?

B. Make these sentences into English.

(02/08/24)

1. 스노쿨링! 나는 수영 뿐 아니라 스노쿨링도 다 해보고 싶어.나는 산호에 매우 관심이 많아.

Snorkeling! I want to not only swim, but also snorkel. I'm really interested in corals. ✔

2. 멋있다! 정말 굉장한 소리처럼 들린다. 나는 수영은 좋아.하지만 깊은 물은 두려워.

Cool! It sounds amazing. I like swimming, but I'm afraid at water. ✔​

 

3. 그럼 나는 계곡에 있는게 더 낫겠다.

Then I would be better in the valley. ✔​

Thank you for doing your homework Tae Gyu. Keep it up!!!​

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