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제 목 Is an international security conference important, why or why not?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2024-03-19
작성글 A.) Is an international security conference important, why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

Problems must be discussed and shared among those involved before they blast or blow up.
This principle can't exclude international matters.
An international security conference will function as a place where countries in trouble can find solutions.
This could be an answer to why an international security conference is important.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(03/18/24)

1. 지금 보유하고 있는 제품을 먼저 공급해주실 수 있나요?
Could you supply the products which you hold now first?

2. 추가 요금을 내는 대신 우선권을 받을 수 있을까요?
Can I be prioritized in return for the additional charge?

3. 적절한 보험회사를 찾도록 합시다.
Let's search for an appropriate insurer.
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A.) Is an international security conference important, why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Problems must be discussed and shared among those involved before they blast or blow up.

This principle can't exclude international matters.

An international security conference will function as a place where countries in trouble can find solutions.

This could be an answer to why an international security conference is important.  ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/18/24)

 

1. 지금 보유하고 있는 제품을 먼저 공급해주실 수 있나요?

 Could you supply the products which you hold now first?  ✔️

 

  

2. 추가 요금을 내는 대신 우선권을 받을 수 있을까요?

Can I be prioritized in return for the additional charge? ✔️

 

3. 적절한 보험회사를 찾도록 합시다.

Let's search for an appropriate insurer.  ✔️

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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