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제 목 What might happen to Alpine ibexes if the warming continues?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2024-03-25
작성글 A.) What might happen to Alpine ibexes if the warming continues? Please elaborate on your answer.

The Alpine ibexes are said to become nocturnal to avoid heat during the day.
Warming temperatures would intensify the tendency of their becoming nocturnal.
At night the ibexes would likely be exposed to predators such as bears, wolves, and lynxes.
So the continuity of warming would endanger the Alpine ibexes.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(03/22/24)

1. 하자품에 대한 귀사의 반품정책은 어떻게 되나요?
What is your return policy for defective products.

2. 모든 하자 제품을 포함하여 품질 보증과 반품은 2 년동안 유효합니다.
Quality guarantee and return will be available within 2 years for all products including defective items.

3. 모든 하자제품의 반송은 최대한 빨리 이루어져야 합니다.
All defective items must be returned as soon as possible.
교정내용

A.) What might happen to Alpine ibexes if the warming continues? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The Alpine ibexes are said to become nocturnal to avoid heat during the day.

Warming temperatures would intensify the tendency of their becoming nocturnal.

At night the ibexes would likely be exposed to predators such as bears, wolves, and lynxes.

So, the continuity of warming would endanger the Alpine ibexes.  ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(03/22/24)

 

1. 하자품에 대한 귀사의 반품정책은 어떻게 되나요?

What is your return policy for defective products?  ✔️

 

2. 모든 하자 제품을 포함하여 품질 보증과 반품은 2 년동안 유효합니다.

Quality guarantee and return will be available within 2 years for all products including defective items. 

=>  Our warranty covers all defective products and lasts for two years.​

 

3. 모든 하자제품의 반송은 최대한 빨리 이루어져야 합니다.

All defective items must be returned as soon as possible.  ✔️

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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