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제 목 Is it a good idea to use animal organs for a human transplant?
교정강사 Colleen(C)
등록일 2024-04-29
작성글 A.) Is it a good idea to use animal organs for a human transplant? Please elaborate on your answer.

I think that organ transplants should go against God's will.
It could not be the exception in the case of animal organs.
Transplanting would be sure to cause disasters to humans.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(04/26/24)

1. 다 방법이 있죠
I know the way.

2. 네 남자친구는 마음이 넓어 보여
Your boyfriend seems broad-minded.

3. 그녀는 나 한테 마음이 없는거 같아서 포기했어
As she seemed to be interested in me, I gave up.
교정내용

A.) Is it a good idea to use animal organs for a human transplant? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

I think that organ transplants should go against God's will.

It could not be the exception in the case of animal organs.

Transplanting would be sure to cause disasters to humans.  ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(04/26/24)

 

1. 다 방법이 있죠

I know the way.  ✔️

2. 네 남자친구는 마음이 넓어 보여

Your boyfriend seems broad-minded.  ✔️

 

3. 그녀는 나 한테 마음이 없는거 같아서 포기했어

As she seemed to be interested in me, I gave up.

=>  She didn't seem interested in me, so I gave up.

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

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