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교정강사 Happy(C)
등록일 2024-05-21
작성글 A. Make sentences using these words: WEIGHTLIFTING / CAREER / STAY IN SHAPE
Some weightlifting athletes can lift over 200kg dumbells.
I want teacher as my career.
It's so hard to stay in shape. Many foods are enough delicious to eat too much.

B. Make these sentences into English.
(05/16/24)
1. 엄마, 저 목 말라요.
Mom, I'm thirsty.
2. 물 주세요.
Give me some water.
3. 계곡에 물이 많아.
A lot of water is in this valley.
교정내용

A. Make sentences using these words: WEIGHTLIFTING / CAREER / STAY IN SHAPE

Some weightlifting athletes can lift over 200kg dumb bells.

 

I want teacher as my career.

 

It's so hard to stay in shape. Many foods are enough delicious to eat too much.

Better: It's hard to stay in shape. There are many delicious foods to eat.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(05/16/24)

1. 엄마, 저 목 말라요.

Mom, I'm thirsty. ✔

2. 물 주세요.

Give me some water.✔​

 

3. 계곡에 물이 많아.

A lot of water is in this valley. ✔​​

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