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교정강사 Lyza(D)O
등록일 2024-06-23
작성글 Hello my name is Lee Yuna. I am 13 years old. I leave in jicheon of South Korea. My favorite subject is P.E
And my favorite food is kimch stew. I have five family members including my self. And my family is always harmonious.l have a boy l like. He is handsome and good at soccer. And l am is school president of Jincheon Sangshin Elementary school. So l am busy and it's hard every day. And I am a Sangshin Elementary school the captain of the women's soccer team. I like soccer And I hear from my friends that I look like a rabbit a kkobugi! I go to Taekwondo academy. I'm a Taekwondo master.My dream is to be a soccer player. But women's soccer is very famous,so l gave up my dream. That was my introduction
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