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교정강사 Noemi(C)
등록일 2021-05-27
작성글 HOMEWORK:
A. What are your earliest memories of television?
Actually I'm not sure what my earliest memories of television is. But I have the most strong impression of TV show, that is 뽀뽀뽀 which was a program for kids. There were a lot of kids who danced and sang, and it was very fun and exciting. So at that time most kids in Korea loved that TV show.


B. Make these sentences into English.
-어디서 지낼 예정이세요?
Where are you going to stay?

-좋은 여행되세요.
Have a nice trip.

-한달 동안 머무릅니다.
I will stay for one month.
교정내용

HOMEWORK:

 A. What are your earliest memories of television?

Actually I'm not sure what my earliest memories of television is. ✔ 

 

 

But I have the most strong impression of TV show, that is  뽀뽀뽀 which was a program for kids. 

  => But there was a TV show that I was impressed by, that is 뽀뽀뽀 which was a program for kids. ​​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.    

 

There were a lot of kids who danced and sang, and it was very fun and exciting. ✔ 

 

 

So at that time most kids in Korea loved that TV show.​

  => So, at that time, most kids in Korea loved that TV show. ​​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.   

 

 B. Make these sentences into English. 

-어디서 지낼 예정이세요?

Where are you going to stay?

  => Where are you planning to stay?​

  => Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.

 

-좋은 여행되세요.

Have a nice trip.

  => Have a great trip.​

  => Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it. 

 

-한달 동안 머무릅니다.

I will stay for one month.

  => I am staying for a month.​

  => Your answer is correct but here's another way of saying it.​ 

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